Tuesday, February 14, 2012

My Prince Charming


My prince charming…

When you look at me,
 I feel so blessed.
The way you smile at me,
Makes me feel dazzled.
Your smile is heart pleasing,
It just makes my day,
Whenever you come near me,
A chill goes down the way.
You make it so special,
You make it all like a dream,
You love me so much,
That you make my heart sing.
When we first held the hands,
And walked together on the road,
I felt so different and divine,
Something I have never felt before.
You call me by various names,
And make it more lovable,
You protect me in the crowd,
Making me feel beautiful.
You cry when I cry,
And you make me blush so hard,
Baby, I have fallen deeply for you,
Fallen very hard.
I can’t express how much you mean to me,
You are my life,
I just know that I love you,
And I want to be your wife.




P.S.- I hope that you all like it. I know, it's not my level of work, but I wrote it in mere 5 to 10 minutes. And besides, I don't write love poems. :P 


This is my second try at love poems, first one... well, I have reserved the first love poem for my future husband :P Abhi toh, aivvee rakhi hai. That one is a confession in my own typical way which is...beautiful... and this is coming from ME :P


Anyways, coming back to this poem, I hope I get atleast some reviews. I hope you like this 'not-so-cheesy-yet-cheesy-in-it's-own-way' type of poem :) Please review :D


P.P.S. - I wrote this poem for my friend, who had to give it to her boyfriend :P 


P.P.P.S. - Kindly review if you can ;)


Happy Valentine's Day <3


- Mahak <3

8 comments:

  1. wife nahi re .. princess !! btw good job !!

    p.s. - i always liked it ..

    p.p.s. - well i also do this kinda work for my frnds ... thats a gud use of one's talent !!:)

    p.p.p.s. - dekho tumhare likhne ke just 5 hours baad 1st review maine hi kiya hai !! i deserve a party !! :D

    p.p.p.p.s - same to u!!

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    1. Hehehe... it's wife only. She told me so :D :D

      P.S. - Thank you!!

      PPS- Really? I do it so many time that I have forgotten counting! :D

      PPPS- Yeah.. right :) U actually are a good reviewer and a grt frd :)

      PPPPPS- :D :D

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  2. grEat j0b yrr mAhAk......
    l0vely crEati0n.....
    5 min me likhi h0 ya 5 saal me.....dat d0es n0t p0se ne threat t0 d fact ki ye bht achhi hai.......:D:D

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    1. Thank you sooo much!

      I am glad that you liked it :)

      And yeah... this is a fact... And i am obliged that you liked it this much :)

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  3. grEat j0b yrr mAhAk......
    l0vely crEati0n.....
    5 min me likhi h0 ya 5 saal me.....dat d0es n0t p0se ne threat t0 d fact ki ye bht achhi hai.......:D:D

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  4. Pata nahi ye wish kb tk pahuchegi but still ....Happy birthday ! :)

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    1. Aww... I saw this post on the next day of my birthday. Thank you :)

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