The wind was blowing softly against my curls,
Each drop of water looked like pearls.
The rain was pouring softly on the ground,
Heavenly was the black coloured clouds.
I was standing near my window,
I could see the beautiful meadow.
Enjoying the full breeze of the wind,
I could feel the sky wink.
The beautiful rainbow made its way out,
All the winds carried away the cloud.
The enchanting and heavenly rain,
Everything else looked lame.
I was enjoying the entire feel,
This scene was without any fees.
I could feel the rhythm of the atmosphere,
There was serenity in hemisphere.
I loved the essence of this rain,
It took away all the pains.
I was lost in this weather,
I felt light as a feather.
Definitely, I love the nature,
And admire all the creatures.
I love to get wet in rain,
I love the way I act insane.
Others may consider me as mad,
But I am just a carefree lad.
Let me live for a while,
Let me walk alone for miles.
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hmm....dunno if I'm right or wrong mahi but I sense some kind of loneliness in all your poem and your poems reflect you as a person somewhere down the line ! kind of see every poem has this line "walk alone" ....
ReplyDeleteanyways again the emotions are expressed beautifully and the way you've captured the beauty of nature is again beautiful!!
@fatima- I don't know what to reply to this yaar. Yup, there is some kind of loneliness in all my poems. Because i write them when i feel lonely or sad. Maybe that gives them a tuned-out effect.
ReplyDeleteI agree that they do reflect me as a person somewhere. I love this line and ya, i have almost used it in all my poems.
Thanks a lot. I am glad that you like this poem also. Thanks a ton!
U have described nature beautifully
ReplyDelete@Aditya- Thanks a lot. I am glad that i was able to describe it beautifully.
ReplyDelete@ Mahak- Sucha beautiful poem. Description of the whole scene is very touching. and yes when we are one with its rhythm, the nature takes away all our pains :)
ReplyDelete@Harsh Sir- Thank you. :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad that I could describe decently. Glad you found it touching. I wanted to go on writing it. But, I had to stop. Mahima wanted a shorter poem.
Nature surely does :) Nature is magical...